Updated Dec 21, 2025
Templates are a starting point, not a destination.
The best cold email performers don't copy-paste templates verbatim. They understand the underlying structure and adapt it to their specific prospect, product, and context.
This collection includes 50 templates across five industries and multiple use cases - each tested in real campaigns with documented results. Use them as frameworks to customize, not scripts to copy.
Before we dive in, a critical reminder: your list quality matters more than your template. Sending the perfect email to the wrong person yields nothing. Sending a decent email to the right person at the right time yields conversations.
How to Use These Templates Effectively
The Customization Framework
Every template has three customization zones:
- Personalization Hook (First 1-2 lines): Must be specific to the recipient. Reference their company, content, recent news, or mutual connection.
- Value Proposition (Middle): Adapt to their specific challenges and your specific solution. Don't just change the company name.
- Call-to-Action (End): Match the ask to your relationship warmth and deal size. Bigger deals need softer CTAs.
Template Performance Benchmarks
Realistic expectations by template type:
Template Type | Expected Open Rate | Expected Reply Rate |
|---|---|---|
Initial outreach | 35-50% | 3-8% |
Follow-up #1 | 30-45% | 4-10% |
Follow-up #2-3 | 25-40% | 2-6% |
Re-engagement | 20-35% | 1-4% |
Partnership pitch | 40-60% | 5-15% |
Top performers hit 15-25% reply rates by combining excellent targeting with strong personalization.
Part 1: SaaS/Tech Templates (10 Templates)
Template 1: The Problem-Solution Hook
Best for: Product-led companies targeting specific pain points Expected reply rate: 5-8%
Subject: Quick question about [specific pain point]
> Hi [First Name], > > Noticed [Company] recently [specific trigger - hired SDRs, raised funding, launched product]. That usually means [related challenge they likely face]. > > We help [similar companies] [specific outcome with metric]. [Company X] cut their [metric] by 40% in 60 days. > > Worth a quick conversation to see if there's a fit? > > [Your name]
Why it works: Connects a trigger event to an implied challenge, then offers proof through a similar company result.
Template 2: The Tech Stack Observation
Best for: B2B SaaS selling to companies using specific tools Expected reply rate: 6-10%
Subject: [Company] + [Your Product]
> Hi [First Name], > > Saw you're using [specific tool from their stack]. Most teams using [tool] struggle with [common limitation of that tool]. > > [Your product] integrates directly with [tool] and helps solve that by [specific capability]. Teams like [similar company] typically see [specific improvement]. > > Interested in seeing how it works? > > [Your name]
Why it works: Demonstrates research depth and positions your product as a natural extension of their existing workflow.
Template 3: The Competitor Comparison
Best for: Differentiating from well-known alternatives Expected reply rate: 4-7%
Subject: [Competitor] alternative worth considering
> Hi [First Name], > > If you're still evaluating [Competitor], wanted to share why teams are switching to [Your Product]. > > The short version: [One key differentiator in plain language]. > > [Customer name] made the switch last quarter and saw [specific result]. Happy to share their story if useful. > > [Your name]
Why it works: Targets prospects actively evaluating solutions and offers social proof from someone who switched.
Template 4: The Case Study Lead
Best for: Companies with strong customer success stories Expected reply rate: 5-9%
Subject: How [Similar Company] [achieved result]
> Hi [First Name], > > [Similar Company] was facing [challenge that prospect likely has]. After implementing [Your Solution], they [specific metric improvement] in [timeframe]. > > Given [Company]'s focus on [their stated priority], thought this might be relevant. > > Want me to send over the full case study? > > [Your name]
Why it works: Leads with proof and makes a low-commitment ask (receiving a document vs. scheduling a call).
Template 5: The Direct Question
Best for: Cutting through noise with busy executives Expected reply rate: 4-6%
Subject: Question about [Company]'s [relevant area]
> Hi [First Name], > > Quick question: Is [specific problem] something [Company] is actively trying to solve right now? > > If so, might be worth comparing notes - we help [companies like theirs] with exactly that. > > If not, no worries at all. > > [Your name]
Why it works: Respects their time, qualifies immediately, and gives an easy out that paradoxically increases responses.
Template 6: The Free Resource Offer
Best for: Building trust before a sales conversation Expected reply rate: 6-10%
Subject: [Resource type] for [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > Put together a [free audit/benchmark/analysis] of [Company]'s [relevant area]. Found a few quick wins worth sharing. > > For example: [One specific finding with potential impact]. > > Want me to send over the full breakdown? > > [Your name]
Why it works: Leads with value, demonstrates expertise, and creates reciprocity.
Template 7: The Mutual Connection
Best for: Leveraging network for warm introductions Expected reply rate: 10-15%
Subject: [Mutual connection] suggested I reach out
> Hi [First Name], > > [Mutual connection name] mentioned you're working on [relevant initiative] and thought we should connect. > > We've helped [similar companies] with [related challenge], and [mutual connection] thought there might be some overlap. > > Worth a brief call to explore? > > [Your name]
Why it works: Social proof from someone they trust dramatically increases open and reply rates.
Template 8: The Industry Trend
Best for: Positioning as a thought leader Expected reply rate: 4-7%
Subject: [Industry trend] affecting [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > Been researching how [industry trend] is impacting companies like [Company]. Seeing a pattern: [specific observation]. > > We're working with [similar companies] on [related solution] and wanted to share what's working. > > Interested in comparing notes? > > [Your name]
Why it works: Positions you as someone following their industry closely, not just pitching a product.
Template 9: The Specific Metric
Best for: Data-driven buyers who care about ROI Expected reply rate: 5-8%
Subject: [Specific metric] at [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > Most [their role]s I talk to are trying to improve [specific metric]. Usually, they're stuck around [common benchmark] and aiming for [target benchmark]. > > We've helped teams like [similar company] go from [X] to [Y] in [timeframe]. If that's relevant, happy to share how. > > [Your name]
Why it works: Speaking in their metrics demonstrates understanding of their world.
Template 10: The Product-Led Trial Push
Best for: SaaS with free trials or freemium models Expected reply rate: 5-8%
Subject: [Company] on MailBeast
> Hi [First Name], > > Saw [Company] signed up for a trial last week. Wanted to check in - any questions so far? > > Most teams get stuck on [common friction point]. Happy to walk through that if useful. > > Either way, here's a quick guide that might help: [link to resource]. > > [Your name]
Why it works: Reaches out at a moment of intent while offering genuine help.
Part 2: Marketing Agency Templates (10 Templates)
Template 11: The Audit Hook
Best for: Agencies offering services tied to measurable metrics Expected reply rate: 6-10%
Subject: [Company]'s [channel] has potential
> Hi [First Name], > > Took a quick look at [Company]'s [channel - website/ads/social]. Spotted a few areas that could drive more [leads/traffic/conversions]. > > For example: [One specific, actionable observation]. > > We help [similar companies] improve [relevant metric]. Want me to send a quick breakdown of what I found? > > [Your name]
Why it works: Proves you've done the work and offers immediate value.
Template 12: The Competitor Insight
Best for: Agencies with competitive intelligence Expected reply rate: 5-8%
Subject: What [Competitor] is doing differently
> Hi [First Name], > > Noticed [Company's competitor] recently [specific marketing tactic - new ad campaign, content strategy, etc.]. Thought you'd want to know. > > We help companies like [Company] [counter or match that strategy]. Happy to share more details if useful. > > [Your name]
Why it works: Competitive intelligence is always valuable and shows market awareness.
Template 13: The Results Story
Best for: Agencies with strong case studies Expected reply rate: 5-9%
Subject: [Similar Company]'s [result] - could work for [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > Just wrapped a project with [similar company] that generated [specific result: leads, revenue, traffic]. > > The approach: [One sentence summary of what you did]. > > Given [Company]'s [current situation or goal], thought this might be relevant. Want me to share how we did it? > > [Your name]
Template 14: The Quick Win Offer
Best for: Agencies selling project-based work Expected reply rate: 6-10%
Subject: Quick win for [Company]'s [area]
> Hi [First Name], > > Reviewing [Company]'s [channel], found one change that could [specific impact] relatively quickly: [specific recommendation]. > > We've implemented similar fixes for [companies] and typically see [result]. > > Would you be open to a 15-minute call to walk through it? > > [Your name]
Template 15: The Partnership Angle
Best for: Agencies targeting companies with internal marketing teams Expected reply rate: 4-7%
Subject: Supporting [Company]'s marketing team
> Hi [First Name], > > Know your team is handling [marketing area] internally. We specialize in [complementary area] and often partner with in-house teams to [specific benefit]. > > Not looking to replace anyone - just add bandwidth where it helps most. > > Worth exploring? > > [Your name]
Template 16: The Industry Focus
Best for: Agencies with vertical specialization Expected reply rate: 5-8%
Subject: [Industry] marketing that works
> Hi [First Name], > > We work exclusively with [industry] companies, so we know what works (and what doesn't) in your space. > > For example, [specific insight about their industry's marketing]. > > Currently helping [similar companies] with [relevant service]. If [Company] is looking to [goal], might be worth a conversation. > > [Your name]
Template 17: The Scaling Support
Best for: Targeting fast-growing companies Expected reply rate: 5-8%
Subject: Scaling [Company]'s [marketing area]
> Hi [First Name], > > Congrats on [recent milestone - funding, growth news, new product]. That usually means [marketing challenge that comes with growth]. > > We help [growth-stage companies] scale their [relevant area] without the typical growing pains. > > Would it help to chat about what's worked for similar companies? > > [Your name]
Template 18: The Content Collaboration
Best for: Content agencies and PR firms Expected reply rate: 6-10%
Subject: Content idea for [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > Had an idea that might work for [Company]'s content: [specific content concept tied to their product/industry]. > > We've produced similar pieces for [companies], and they've performed well for [specific metric]. > > Worth discussing? > > [Your name]
Template 19: The Seasonal Push
Best for: Agencies with seasonally relevant services Expected reply rate: 4-7%
Subject: [Company]'s [season/event] marketing
> Hi [First Name], > > With [season/event] approaching, curious if [Company] has plans for [relevant marketing activity]. > > We've helped [similar companies] run campaigns that [specific result]. > > If you're still planning, might be worth comparing notes. > > [Your name]
Template 20: The Direct Offer
Best for: Transactional services with clear deliverables Expected reply rate: 4-6%
Subject: [Specific deliverable] for [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > We create [specific deliverable] for [type of companies]. [Pricing/timeframe] for [specific scope]. > > Recent examples: [link or brief description]. > > If this fits a current need, I'm happy to share more details. > > [Your name]
Part 3: Recruiting Templates (10 Templates)
Template 21: The Role-Specific Outreach
Best for: Sourcing passive candidates Expected reply rate: 15-25%
Subject: [Role] opportunity - thought of you
> Hi [First Name], > > Your background in [specific skill/experience] caught my attention. We're working with a [company type] looking for a [role title] to [key responsibility]. > > The role: [One sentence on the opportunity - level, location, impact]. > > Interested in learning more? > > [Your name]
Why it works: Specific and respectful of their time with a clear, low-commitment ask.
Template 22: The Career Growth Angle
Best for: Targeting candidates in roles with limited growth Expected reply rate: 18-30%
Subject: Next step in your career?
> Hi [First Name], > > Noticed you've been at [Company] for [X years] in [role]. Curious if you're open to exploring what's next. > > Working with a [company type] looking for someone with your [specific experience]. The role offers [growth opportunity - leadership, new challenge, better comp]. > > Worth a conversation? > > [Your name]
Template 23: The Referral Request
Best for: Expanding network through candidates Expected reply rate: 10-20%
Subject: Know anyone looking for a [role]?
> Hi [First Name], > > We're helping [Company] find a [role title]. Given your network in [industry/skill area], thought you might know someone who'd be a great fit. > > Quick overview: [Role summary - company, level, key requirements]. > > Anyone come to mind? > > [Your name]
Template 24: The Passive Candidate Warm-Up
Best for: Building relationships before specific roles Expected reply rate: 12-20%
Subject: Keeping in touch
> Hi [First Name], > > We don't have anything specific right now, but I'd like to stay in touch for when we do. > > Working on [type of roles] for [type of companies]. If that ever becomes relevant, I'd love to be a resource. > > Happy to connect on LinkedIn if easier - or just reply when the timing's right. > > [Your name]
Template 25: The Confidential Opportunity
Best for: Executive-level or sensitive searches Expected reply rate: 20-30%
Subject: Confidential opportunity - [Role level]
> Hi [First Name], > > Reaching out about a confidential [role level] search. Can't share all details yet, but thought your background would be relevant. > > Would you be open to a brief conversation to learn more? > > [Your name]
Why it works: Confidentiality creates intrigue while respecting that some conversations need discretion.
Template 26: The Competitor Targeting
Best for: Sourcing from specific companies Expected reply rate: 15-22%
Subject: [Their Company] → [Opportunity type]
> Hi [First Name], > > Know you're at [Their Company] - curious if you'd be open to exploring something new. > > Working with a [company description] that's looking for someone with your [specific background]. [One key selling point of the role]. > > Worth a confidential conversation? > > [Your name]
Template 27: The Re-Engagement
Best for: Candidates who weren't ready previously Expected reply rate: 8-15%
Subject: Still at [Company]?
> Hi [First Name], > > We chatted [X months ago] about opportunities, but timing wasn't right. Curious if anything's changed. > > Currently working on a [role description] that might be a fit given your [specific experience]. > > Open to reconnecting? > > [Your name]
Template 28: The Skills-Based Match
Best for: Technical or specialized roles Expected reply rate: 15-25%
Subject: Your [specific skill] experience
> Hi [First Name], > > Your work with [specific technology/skill] stood out. Working with a team that's building [project type] and needs someone with exactly that background. > > Role details: [Key points - level, company type, challenge]. > > Interested in hearing more? > > [Your name]
Template 29: The Company Culture Pitch
Best for: Roles at companies with strong brands Expected reply rate: 12-20%
Subject: [Company Name] is hiring
> Hi [First Name], > > [Company Name] is looking for a [role]. Given your background in [relevant area], thought you might be interested. > > A bit about them: [One sentence on culture, mission, or what makes them unique]. > > Want to learn more? > > [Your name]
Template 30: The Urgency Signal
Best for: Roles with immediate hiring needs Expected reply rate: 18-28%
Subject: [Role] - moving quickly
> Hi [First Name], > > [Company] is moving fast on a [role] search - interviewing this week. > > Your [specific experience] matches what they're looking for. [One key detail about the opportunity]. > > Interested in being considered? > > [Your name]
Part 4: Consulting/Professional Services Templates (10 Templates)
Template 31: The Problem Framing
Best for: Consultants solving complex business challenges Expected reply rate: 4-7%
Subject: [Specific challenge] at [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > Companies at [Company's stage/size] often struggle with [specific challenge]. Usually shows up as [symptom they'd recognize]. > > We've helped [similar organizations] address this by [high-level approach]. The typical result: [outcome]. > > If this resonates, happy to share more context. > > [Your name]
Template 32: The Thought Leadership
Best for: Establishing credibility before pitching Expected reply rate: 5-8%
Subject: Research on [relevant topic]
> Hi [First Name], > > Recently published research on [topic relevant to their business]. One finding: [specific insight]. > > Thought this might be relevant given [Company]'s focus on [their priority]. > > Happy to send the full report if useful. > > [Your name]
Template 33: The Diagnostic Offer
Best for: Consultants with assessment-based sales processes Expected reply rate: 6-10%
Subject: Quick assessment for [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > We offer a [free/low-cost] [assessment type] for [type of companies]. Takes [timeframe] and shows [what they'll learn]. > > Recent example: [Company] discovered [specific insight] that led to [outcome]. > > Interested in scheduling one? > > [Your name]
Template 34: The Peer Comparison
Best for: Consultants with industry benchmarks Expected reply rate: 5-8%
Subject: How [Company] compares
> Hi [First Name], > > Been analyzing [industry] companies on [specific metric]. [Company] appears to be [above/below/at] average for [specific area]. > > The top performers are doing [specific thing]. If closing that gap is a priority, might be worth comparing notes. > > [Your name]
Template 35: The Executive Briefing
Best for: Targeting C-suite and senior leaders Expected reply rate: 3-6%
Subject: [Topic] briefing for [their role]
> Hi [First Name], > > We're offering 30-minute executive briefings on [topic] for [their role type]. > > The session covers: [2-3 bullet points of what they'll learn]. > > No pitch - just sharing what we're seeing across [industry]. > > Would [date/time] work? > > [Your name]
Template 36: The Workshop Invitation
Best for: Consultants who lead with educational content Expected reply rate: 5-9%
Subject: Invitation: [Workshop topic]
> Hi [First Name], > > Hosting a [virtual/in-person] workshop on [topic] for [their role type]. > > We'll cover [specific outcomes] based on work with [type of companies]. > > [Date, time, duration]. Thought it might be relevant given [Company]'s [focus area]. > > Interested? > > [Your name]
Template 37: The Change Trigger
Best for: Targeting companies going through transitions Expected reply rate: 5-8%
Subject: [Company]'s [recent change]
> Hi [First Name], > > Noticed [Company] recently [change event - new leadership, acquisition, strategic shift]. That usually means [challenge that follows]. > > We've helped other [companies going through similar changes] navigate this by [approach]. > > If relevant, happy to share more. > > [Your name]
Template 38: The Results Guarantee
Best for: Consultants with performance-based models Expected reply rate: 6-10%
Subject: Guaranteed [outcome] for [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > We guarantee [specific outcome] for [type of companies] or [what happens if you don't deliver]. > > Typically, this means [quantified result] within [timeframe]. > > If [Company] is looking to [related goal], might be worth discussing. > > [Your name]
Template 39: The Referral Follow-Up
Best for: Following up on partner or customer referrals Expected reply rate: 12-18%
Subject: [Referrer name] suggested we connect
> Hi [First Name], > > [Referrer name] from [their company] mentioned you might be dealing with [challenge]. They thought a conversation could be helpful. > > We've worked with [Referrer's company] on [relevant project]. Happy to share what's worked if useful. > > Worth a quick call? > > [Your name]
Template 40: The Simple Introduction
Best for: Building long-term relationships Expected reply rate: 4-7%
Subject: Introduction
> Hi [First Name], > > Wanted to introduce myself. We work with [type of companies] on [area of expertise]. > > Not pitching anything specific - just connecting with [role type] in [industry] to stay current on what challenges are top of mind. > > Open to a brief call sometime? > > [Your name]
Part 5: Follow-Up and Re-Engagement Templates (10 Templates)
Template 41: The Soft Follow-Up
Best for: First follow-up after initial email Expected reply rate: 4-10%
Subject: Re: [Original subject line]
> Hi [First Name], > > Just floating this back up in case it got buried. > > [One sentence summary of the original value proposition]. > > Worth a quick conversation? > > [Your name]
Template 42: The Value-Add Follow-Up
Best for: Second or third follow-up Expected reply rate: 3-7%
Subject: Re: [Original subject line]
> Hi [First Name], > > Wanted to share this - [relevant resource, article, or case study] that relates to [original topic]. > > Thought it might be useful regardless of whether we connect. > > [Your name]
Template 43: The Social Proof Follow-Up
Best for: Adding credibility in follow-ups Expected reply rate: 4-8%
Subject: Re: [Original subject line]
> Hi [First Name], > > Quick update: We just helped [similar company] achieve [specific result]. > > If [Company] is still looking to [original goal], might be worth comparing notes. > > [Your name]
Template 44: The Different Angle
Best for: When initial approach didn't resonate Expected reply rate: 3-6%
Subject: Different thought for [Company]
> Hi [First Name], > > Realized I led with [original topic], but [Company] might actually benefit more from [different angle]. > > [Brief explanation of why this matters to them]. > > Does this resonate more? > > [Your name]
Template 45: The Break-Up Email
Best for: Final email in sequence Expected reply rate: 2-5%
Subject: Closing the loop
> Hi [First Name], > > Haven't heard back, so I'll assume the timing isn't right. > > If things change and [original value proposition] becomes relevant, feel free to reach out. > > Wishing [Company] the best. > > [Your name]
Why it works: Loss aversion - people often respond when they realize this is their last chance.
Template 46: The Permission Check
Best for: Re-engaging cold leads after long gaps Expected reply rate: 3-6%
Subject: Still interested in [topic]?
> Hi [First Name], > > We connected [X months ago] about [topic]. Curious if that's still on your radar. > > If so, happy to reconnect. If not, no problem - just let me know and I'll update my notes. > > [Your name]
Template 47: The New Information
Best for: Re-engaging with legitimate news Expected reply rate: 5-9%
Subject: Update: [New development]
> Hi [First Name], > > Since we last connected, we've [new development - feature launch, customer win, research finding]. > > Thought this might change the equation for [Company]. [One sentence on relevance]. > > Worth revisiting? > > [Your name]
Template 48: The Trigger Event Re-Engagement
Best for: Reaching out after company news Expected reply rate: 5-10%
Subject: Congrats on [trigger event]
> Hi [First Name], > > Saw [Company]'s news about [trigger event]. Congrats. > > That usually means [related challenge or opportunity]. We've helped other companies in similar situations with [relevant solution]. > > Worth reconnecting? > > [Your name]
Template 49: The Direct Ask
Best for: Clearing ambiguity after multiple touches Expected reply rate: 3-6%
Subject: Quick question
> Hi [First Name], > > I've reached out a few times about [topic]. If it's not relevant, just let me know - I'll stop following up. > > But if there's interest and timing is just off, happy to reconnect whenever it makes sense. > > Either way, a quick reply helps. > > [Your name]
Template 50: The Long-Term Nurture
Best for: Staying top of mind without being pushy Expected reply rate: 2-4%
Subject: Thought you'd find this interesting
> Hi [First Name], > > Came across this [article/resource/insight] and thought of [Company]. > > [One sentence on why it's relevant]. > > No ask - just sharing. Hope things are going well. > > [Your name]
Templates to Avoid
Some approaches are overdone and trigger immediate delete responses:
Don't use:
- "I hope this email finds you well" (generic opener)
- "Just checking in" (no value)
- "Per my last email" (passive-aggressive)
- "Would you be the right person to talk to?" (do your research)
- "We're the #1 solution for..." (unverifiable claim)
- "I'd love to pick your brain" (one-sided ask)
- Long feature lists (no one reads them)
- Excessive exclamation points (looks desperate)
Putting It All Together with MailBeast
The right template gets you started. The right platform helps you scale.
MailBeast makes it easy to:
- Test variations: A/B test subject lines, openers, and CTAs across templates
- Personalize at scale: AI-powered customization that feels human
- Track what works: See which templates drive replies and conversions
- Optimize sequences: Build follow-up sequences with the right timing
Start with these templates, customize them to your prospects, and let MailBeast handle the infrastructure that gets them delivered.
Key Takeaways
- Templates are frameworks, not scripts. Customize every email.
- List quality beats template quality. The best email to the wrong person fails.
- Shorter is better. Stay under 100 words for initial outreach.
- Follow-ups matter. 70% of responses come from emails 2-4.
- Soft CTAs outperform hard asks. "Worth a conversation?" beats "Can we schedule?"
- Industry context matters. Use templates designed for your space.
Frequently Asked Questions
How many templates should I test?
Start with 2-3 variations of your best-fit template. Test subject lines first (highest impact), then test openers and CTAs. Run tests with at least 100 sends per variation for statistical significance.
Should I use the same template for everyone?
No. Segment by company size, industry, role, and trigger events. A template that works for startup founders won't work for enterprise executives.
How long should follow-up sequences be?
3-5 emails total is optimal. First email plus 2-4 follow-ups spaced 2-5 days apart. Don't exceed 7 total touches without a response.
Can I use AI to customize templates?
Yes, but review before sending. AI excels at research and first-line personalization but can produce generic or awkward output. Human oversight ensures quality.
What's more important: subject line or body?
Subject line gets the open; body gets the reply. Both matter, but if your subject line fails, the best body in the world won't help.
Last updated: January 2026
